Here is an (real) example of what you don’t want to write on a cover letter with explanations.這裡是一個（真正）的例子，你不想寫上封面信與解釋。


Dear Sir/ Madam,親愛的先生/女士，

I am looking forward to a job, which matches my qualifications and where analytical skills & logical reasoning are involved.我期待著一份工作，這符合我的學歷和那裡的分析技能及邏輯推理所涉及的。 I am a hard worker towards achieving my goals.我是一名工人，努力實現我的目標。

The enclosed resume elaborates the details of my skills and merits.封閉的恢復闡述的細節我的技能和優點。

Looking forward to a positive reply.期待一個正面的答复。

Current CTC : Rs.目前，反恐委員會：盧比。 XY lacs/A的XY lacs / 1
Expected CTC : 25% Hike預計反恐委員會： 25 ％上升
Joining Date : 15 days加入日期： 15天

Thanks and Regards感謝和問候
[Name Removed] [除名]

Email : [Email Removed]電子郵件： [電子郵件刪除]

ph: [Phone Removed] pH值： [電話清除]

The first mistake was not including the actual resume in the email.第一錯是不包括實際恢復在電子郵件中。 Look at his first sentence:看看他的第一句：
“I am looking forward to a job, which matches my qualifications and where analytical skills & logical reasoning are involved.” “我期待著一份工作，這符合我的學歷和那裡的分析技能及邏輯推理所涉及的” 。

While this is reasonable, it is a stock response.雖然這是合理的，它是一個存量的回應。 He obviously hasn’t done any research on what the company does or else he would have known.很明顯，他沒有做過任何研究，對什麼公司，否則，他將眾所周知的。 It is always advisable to provide individually tailored blurb in your cover letter.它始終是可取的，提供單獨定制blurb在您的封面信。

“analytical skills & logical reasoning are involved” “分析能力與邏輯推理是涉及”
Even in flipping burgers they are involved to some extent.即使在翻開漢堡，他們涉及在一定程度上。 He clearly hasn’t thought about his blurb.他顯然沒有想過他blurb 。

” I am a hard worker towards achieving my goals.” “我是一名工人，努力實現我的目標” 。
Normally companies and recruiters want to hear how you can work towards achieving their goals and not necessarily the candidates.通常的公司和招聘者都想听你如何努力實現自己的目標，而不一定是候選人。 Other than that this sentence actually adds some value by stating his proclivity to hard work.其他比這句話實際上是增加了一些價值，說明他proclivity向辛勤工作。 Personally I prefer intelligent work.我個人喜歡的智能工作。

“The enclosed resume elaborates the details of my skills and merits. “封閉的恢復闡述的細節我的技能和優點。 “
It is advisable not to state the obvious.最好不要國家明顯。

“Current CTC : Rs. “目前，反恐委員會：盧比。 XY lacs/A的XY lacs / 1
Expected CTC : 25% Hike”預計反恐委員會： 25 ％的上漲“
This is plain outrageous.這是平原離譜。 The candidate wasn’t even interviewed or even communicated with and he is stating his terms in potential salary negotiation!候選人甚至沒有接受採訪，甚至溝通，和他說明他的計算，潛在的薪資談判！
First of all most companies are first and foremost interested in what a candidate can contribute.首先，所有公司最首要的興趣在什麼候選人可以作出貢獻。 If they are happy then will go an extra mile or two, even bend over backwards at times, to accomodate the candidates needs.如果他們很高興，然後將一個額外英里或兩個，甚至彎腰向後時候，以容納考生的需要。 I think this scores very much against the candidate.我覺得這分數非常反對的候選人。 While employer-employee relationship is mostly bonded by money, nobody wants to hire a purely money centric guy (or gal) because of loyalty concerns.而雇主和僱員的關係，大多是保稅區以金錢，沒有人願意僱用一個純粹的金錢為中心的傢伙（或GAL ）中，因為忠誠度的關注。

I think he should have briefly mentioned his capabilites and how he can contribute to the company and convey his eagerness, if real, to work for the company.我覺得他應該有簡略提及他的capabilites ，以及他如何能有助於該公司和轉達他渴望，如果真實，為公司工作。 That’s all that is required in a cover letter.這一切是需要在一個封面信。

As an employer (if you are one), what are your thoughts on this candidate?作為一個雇主（如果你是1 ） ，什麼是您的想法就這個候選人？